help-me-to-improve-the-body-paragraph-and-finish-the-conclusion

1. Please follow my Outline and finish the rest of part of essay.

2. Each body paragraphs should use PEA form.

3. Points which I have already done, evidences (some paragraphs have too much) , and analysis ( Lacks of useful analysis).

4. Each body paragraph should have 2 or more evidence and analysis.

5. Conclusion should not retell the story, answer something about what the story teach us.

6. The whole essay should be 1000 words or more.

7. Follow my cited form ( par. xx)

8. Add a Worked Cited Page.