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Overall, this is a well-organized and well-founded examination. You do a nice job of presenting relevant information and maintaining a clear line of thinking throughout your writing. Much of my feedback has to do with word choice and clarity of sentence-level things. I did not find fault in your formatting.

I did notice there were a few times where you said “we” … this was confusing, as I believe you are the sole author of the paper – make sure you are addressing the work, not necessarily yourself/the audience.

I hope you find my feedback to be useful – I wish you the best in your revision and submission of this paper.