I need help for my grammar. I need to submit my application to Pharmacy School, please help me edit my grammar for my essay and if possible, please change and edit my sentences into perfect ones. I in

I need help for my grammar. I need to submit my application to Pharmacy School, please help me edit my grammar for my essay and if possible, please change and edit my sentences into perfect ones. I included the requirement in my essay. 

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