check-the-question-in-the-requirements

Using instructor feedback, strategies outlined in EBC Chs. 3, 4, & 5, and your own developing writing knowledge, revise a paragraph or two of your WeP Document #1 OR WeP Document #2. Post both the original and revised versions of the paragraph, and describe in detail what changes you made and why. (Reference as many strategies from the textbook as possible/necessary.)